tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post1809332597097160912..comments2023-05-22T03:59:01.772-07:00Comments on Ruchira's Ramblings: Fruit Punch-FictionFriday2Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-8973875326455623932010-11-30T09:02:25.390-08:002010-11-30T09:02:25.390-08:00Mmm....nice one...d ending was quite a surprise......Mmm....nice one...d ending was quite a surprise...gud suspense throughout..<br /><br />Decades since I hav read Crime stories...lollzzzz...<br /><br />Regs. Forum Bunny :pDEEPAKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00330265069273155714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-51093878000003764072010-11-10T17:13:34.097-08:002010-11-10T17:13:34.097-08:00Great story. Very well written and intriguing. Kep...Great story. Very well written and intriguing. Kept me guessing till the end. Nice work!Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06488832373580617482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-50836149884223246872010-11-05T20:02:32.163-07:002010-11-05T20:02:32.163-07:00I was beginning to shake my head at the girl. What...I was beginning to shake my head at the girl. What a fool! I thought, imagine getting into a car with a strange man. So pleased she wasn't a naive as I had her pegged. Nice surprise twist. And I know where you're coming from with the no correction, I find it impossible not to edit as I go. Cheers.tanya bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11675926010129702369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-39539564887265132112010-11-05T16:49:15.172-07:002010-11-05T16:49:15.172-07:00Welcome!
Don't worry about editing. None of us...Welcome!<br />Don't worry about editing. None of us do. It's all okay.John Penderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713403125655682082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-60886953283719500562010-11-05T14:36:21.484-07:002010-11-05T14:36:21.484-07:00I really like this one. There were so many red fla...I really like this one. There were so many red flags for this girl. I was terrified for her. You kept me on the edge of my seat and then bam! with the surprise ending. I'm so glad she's okay.Laura Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407312422139066511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7200346549799023685.post-37693680968616548852010-11-05T06:21:47.312-07:002010-11-05T06:21:47.312-07:00Welcome to Fiction Friday! it is hard isn't it...Welcome to Fiction Friday! it is hard isn't it? not to go and edit? but when the story starts flowing - what great ideas you can come up with! thanks for playing with us this week<br /><br />I agree with you - with a few edits - this has the potential for being a great little crime story. <br /><br />My first draft flash fiction this week can be found here <br />http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2010/11/sliver.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01308937047474819914noreply@blogger.com